Monday, October 27, 2014

Blog Post #10

First Grader's in Mrs. Cassidy Class
Summary of the Video:
    Mrs. Cassidy First grade class was showing different techniques on blogging and how to blog. The student's were able to demonstrate their blogging skills and work online. They are able to meet different people around the world, in a safe way. The student's was able to explain how you should only use your first name and not your last name, and how you should always say nice thing's when commenting on someone else blog. The student's also use their blogs as online portfolio's for their work.

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    Watching this video shared a lot of valuable information. Mrs. Cassidy has been blogging for five years now. She think this is a great technique in her classroom. She explain's in the video how parent's think this is a great tool, and a way to keep up with their child's learning throughout the classroom. The student's really like the use of technology and how they are able to use it in the classroom. The student's love blogging and showing off their work to other student's across the world. Mrs. Cassidy explain's also they she keep her student's safe by telling them not to post their last name, only first. Also, she explains to her student's how it is not safe to post picture's of themselves online. In my classroom, I want to be able to use the different technique's like Mrs. Cassidy with different ways of using technology. My student's will be able to use technology and learning to blog frequently in the classroom. I think all future teacher's can use a pointer or two from Mrs. Cassidy video on how important technology is in the classroom.

Student's Bloggin

3 comments:

  1. "The student's were able to…" The noun students is plural, not possessive. This is the mistake you make most frequently. You must learn the difference between plural, not possessive nouns. Now!

    "The student's was able…" students were, not student's was

    "say nice thing's when " "Things is not possessive. It is a plural noun!"

    "The student's also use…" students, not student's

    "...online portfolio's for their work." portfolios, not portfolio's

    "Watching this video shared a lot of valuable information." Awkward. Maybe I learned a lot by watching this video. Or this video contained a lot of useful information. Watching, however, did not share!

    In the following twelve places you use an apostrophe when you should not. Add the 5 above and we have a total of 17 mistakes in two short paragraphs. The nouns and verbs you use are plural, not possessive. In addition, verbs are never possessive.
    "She explain's in the video…" explains, not explain's
    "...parent's think…" parents, not parent's
    "The student's really like…" students, not student's
    "The student's love blogging…"
    "...to other student's across…"
    "Mrs. Cassidy explain's also…"
    "...she keep her student's safe…" ALSO keeps, not keep
    "...to her student's how it is not safe…"
    "...to post picture's of themselves…"
    "... different technique's like …"
    "...My student's will be able…"
    " I think all future teacher's…"

    Unsatisfactory.

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  2. I missed one: "First Grader's in Mrs. Cassidy Class" That makes 18!

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  3. I liked the content of your blog. I think it is important to have a class blog like Mrs. Cassidys. I think each of my students will have their own blogs to share their projects with their parents and peer.

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